Wednesday, 27 April 2011

Do you want someone used ?
                        someone touched by others?
                        someone passed around ?
someone who will do for you nothing more than they
                                                          would do for another ?
someone who sells themselves ?
someone that ruined lives ?  
someone who can manipulate with ease ?

the heart and soul behind corruption ?

someone who is little more than a trophy ?





                                                               Money is dirty.
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4 comments:

  1. lauraleh130 April 2011 at 11:55

    This poem is intelligent! I sense a double-meaning and a play on words and I certainly enjoyed using my imagination!

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  2. Ay "CemixV" Kay1 May 2011 at 15:01

    I like it! It shows reality in a new way, and makes you think. Very nice!

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  3. Jodi The Great2 May 2011 at 16:58

    Wow! Great concept. I enjoyed how the words mislead you until the end of the poem. Great job!

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  4. Jayden McLean8 May 2011 at 19:55

    This is striking. It brings forth a single point and displays its many facets. Quick, to the point, and powerful. Very nice work.

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