Sunday, 1 May 2011

perfection

No slight misconception should throw you off balance.
You’ve created this pretentious utopia on a pedestal.
                   
                                        Rise      on      it.

                             Where are you now?
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2 comments:

  1. Just Steve1 May 2011 at 16:51

    I like it. I think the two bloded "you"'s are very effective as a way to say the idea of perfection depends on us individially. Great job Layla!

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  2. Ashley Daniels1 May 2011 at 19:03

    I love the accusatory feel of this poem. It's short and sweet, the winning side of an argument.

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